whats wrong with- my first post "intro"

      Hi everyone , My name is Shane O'Leary. I am an average american teetering on the edge of lower middle class and I am tired of the people we elect to protect us( Republican and Democrats alike) trying to push me over the edge into poverty.
     I decided to start this blog for several reasons:
1. To point out the problems of the United States laws,ways of doing business,etc
2. To inform you if possible of one or more ways to solve the problems found, there is no reason complaining about something if you dont have a solution
3.  To raise funds to get average americans that understand our problems get elected .If we keep electing the same wealthy guys we have been our problems will never go away. The guys in office have no clue as to life in the real world
       I am no grammer student for sure so my spelling and punctuation may be wrong sometimes but I will do my best to ensure my solutions wont be.
       This will be a weekly blog with next weeks blog talking about political pay and benifits
and for the donations I will be listing weekly the amount in the fund and if any gets used where it went (I would love to have a program to list it in the sidebar)